Written by: Zennor, zoz and hot_shot
Zennor
Sing a song of Minoto
Its time to play minoto that lovely time is here,
Oh look there sits the panda -he's hungry that is clear,
Uncles wife is angry, hanging out the clothes,
Feed the panda the potato and then hold your nose!
The sheep is looking hot so shave of his coat,
Fill the balloon with gas and release the flying boat,
Uncles wife cleans the fleece- and a pile of dust you see,
Give it to the rabbit and he’ll give you back a key!
Open up the chest and what do you get back,
A pretty little egg that has a funny crack,
Put it on the ground and watch the monkey play ball,
Out comes a baby birdie its the Egg end for all.
4/6/10 14:34
zoz
Bird's EEG 2: A Tribute in Haiku
(Note: I have to wonder why the Bird needed an ElectroEncephaloGram, but I cannot question the Wisdom of Minoto)
Although not in traditional Haiku form (5-7-5), these closing comments are pure poetry, and inspired the Haiku that follows it:
The bird is a moment that incubates from the egg.
The thing seen for the first time.
It is recognized that it is parents.
The monkey thought.
The monkey is surprised to get an unexpected present a little.
A short monkey stands
Basketball that splashes well
There, beside dried leaves
Transformation belt
Unknown high technology
Holds surprise in store
Sweet potato vine
Beauteous petals of green
Pull the root to light
Root: The thing that will
Eat the way things are going
Cannot be done. No.
Uncle who transforms
Important hair reproduced
Soon there will be fire
It is possible
Due to electricity
To use drill at ease
This Uncle of fire!
Luminous, the hair ignites
Cupcake burns with light
Fire engulfs dry leaves
Smoke rises as flames perform
Potato is grilled
Panda will eat it
Roasted potato so sweet
His manners are poor!
Purple clouds of gas
Emanate from panda's butt
This gas smells fragrant
A green balloon comes
To the surface in the sky
I want to swell it
Fill the orb with gas
Purple Panda gas enters
And it came to float
The basket rises
Kitten and electric cord
Are carried aloft
Hair clippers enjoyed
Because of the vibration
The Rat's pleasure soared!
Sheep with woolen coat
Unceremoniously
Shorn and left naked
Mother with anger
Beats the air while Panda sits
Contemplating gas
Give fleece to Mother
She beats it mercilessly
Lots of dust went out
Bunny's big moment!
Cascading dust leaves a key
A usual key
Rustling bushes move
The box with lock is revealed
The key is employed
Egg that cracked entered
The knack knack and beaten sound
Heard among the egg
A short monkey stands
Basketball that splashes well
Now the bird is born!
Birds EEG 2
Egg end only one method
We praise Minoto!
6/6/10 01:54
hot_Shot
IT'SMY2GRANDMAS'BIRTHDAYTHISWEEKTHROUGH: Take belt and basketball.Give basketball to monkey.Go right,click on the plant and take the sweet potato.Go right,take balloon and give belt to the man.Oh my gosh!He turned into a giant marshmallow!How is that even possible?Take him and go right.Take drill and go left twice.Give drill to green cat and put the uncle on the table to make him light up(poor uncle!He turned into a giant marshmallow,now his last piece of hair is on fire!Poor bald marshmallow uncle!).Go left and use uncle to burn the dried leaves(he's already a bald marshmallow and he's still in crime of air pollution!?What is wrong with him!?But his hair is still there!Aw forget it!).Cook the sweet potato in the fire(oh that's okay!)and you will get roasted sweet potato.Go right twice and give roasted potato to the panda.Take the panda's fart(oh man!And the description says "Gas that smells fragrant"!?Oh forget it let's get back to the game!)and use it to inflate the balloon(you know how!Click the balloon,click ? and put the fragrant fart in.But that's still weird to me!).Go right and give balloon to cat.Take the electric shaver(why does he call it hair clippers?)and go left twice.Use electric shaver to shave the sheep and take the fleece.Go right and give fleece to the woman and take dust(*coughs*).Go right and give the dust to the rabbit.Take key and go left twice.Click on bush and use key to open the box.Take egg,go left and put the egg under the basketball hoop.
The bird is a moment that incubates from the egg. The thing seen for the first time. It is recognized that it is parents. The monkey thought. The monkey is surprised to get an unexpected present a little. Egg end only one method SOME ADDITIONAL STUFF:
IT'S MY 2 GRANDMAS' BIRTHDAY THIS WEEK!As you know,I hate typing too much so if you want to see more details, click here. @Zennor,great songthrough @Psycho829,nice walkthrough @zoz,great haiku!That's my favorite kind of poem because it's short because it has 17 syllables only like this: 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables @Edgar,thanks!
6/6/10 12:40
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