Written by: kitkatfox
Everyone else seems so good at writing these. I thought I would make an attempt. Hopefully, not too poor of one!
A silly through
You wake up in a hallway feeling very strange, and somehow less than normal. You see a poor, flattened pig go into his door. Being a terrible person, you follow and enter without permission. You take a look around the room very quickly, but the pig has gone. Good! While he’s not here, you can snoop for valuables. Those bills are waiting for you when you get home. Wherever home is. Nothing of interest in the drawers, but the carousel can spin and the star lights up. They don’t seem to be worth much, so you don’t really care. Maybe the TV is worth taking? Even if it isn’t a flatscreen, it must be worth a least a few dollars.
You turn it on, but it doesn’t work correctly. It only gets one lousy channel. Something nags as you. That view on the TV seems strange! You look up and see the piggy homeowner! Oh no! You got caught! But wait … he doesn’t seems interested in attacking you. He just leaves. Maybe he will lead you to his safe! So you follow him.
Well, he sure doesn’t seem very worried. He’s just there eating a donut. You notice that there’s no phone here for him to call the police. Maybe you should be more threatening. You open one of the cupboards and see the knife behind the paper. Ha! “I’ll make him take me to his safe,” you think. You threaten him with the knife, but he just scarfs down the donut and runs away.
Frustrated, you follow, but he seems to have disappeared again. Feeling angry, you mess the room up. You play with the ball on the shelf until it falls, and then you slam the nightstand drawer until the clock falls and breaks. But this doesn’t ease your frustration enough. Where did the pig go? So you do the unthinkable, you knock down the stuffed bunny. Boy, you really are mean! Poor pig comes out of his hiding place to save the stuffed bunny. Who knows what horrors you were going to cause? After rescuing the beloved animal, he runs. You again follow. You are determined to get him to tell you where the valuables are!
You go through the door on the other side of the hall, but you were already in here. The house is all connected. Suspicious, you go back into the hall and close the open door.
There is the stunned homeowner. You must have knocked him a bit silly when you hit the door he was hiding behind. You tap him on the shoulder to see if he is okay. You are not really a monster after all. Just a bit desperate. He is not harmed, but was hiding from you with the knife from the kitchen. Yikes! (That will teach you to leave the knife laying around.) You decide to leave -- a crazed pig with a knife isn’t something to mess with.
When you head out, though, you feel strange. You open your eyes to a shocking sight! You were in a donut??! At least you grew big when you left. The tiny pig is now no threat.
Now your soul hangs in the balance. Do you choose evil or good? Do you repay the poor pig with a lump of sugar large enough for him to make an addition to his house? Or do you put the sugar in your coffee and eat his house?
The choice is up to you!
18/2/10 19:42
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